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Wednesday, 4 December 2013

       

                             On Board The Boussole


Likes: Number 1

I liked it when Julienne said that all her cherished memories washed away by the water. All of my memories, washed away with my diary into the sea. I liked this because it showed how much Julienne cared for her diary and what she did. This showed Julienne's real feelings and what kind of a person Julienne is. I don't know why I like people who are like this really.

Number 2:

I enjoyed it when Julienne described how she dreamed of biting into a crisp juicy apple so well. She had so much detail in describing of how she dreamed of eating an apple. I like to write detailed pieces of writing so obviously I enjoyed this part of the story a lot. Also she made the apple sound so lovely and  it could have made your mouth water.

Dislikes: Number 1:

I disliked it when Petit Peirrie found Julienne writing in her diary and sneaked up to her and snatched her journal off her. He then ran out of the cabin, onto the deck and threw her journal overboard. This was absolutely horrible in my opinion. Who would actually do that. I hated this part because I don't do this and if this happened to someone I knew I wouid be so angry and feel so sorry for that person.

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