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I like the part when the girl in a marathon of her own went to the olympics stadium to set up the olympics but then on the day the funny thing was that the people there were hungry and the canteen t was sold out so then the crowd was eating each other because there was no food
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The part i don't like is that it was boring just reading about some girl who wanted to be in the olympics for running in a marathon but if I wrote this book then I would make it more exciting with like the girl runs in the marathon but the she gets taken by a monster or something with for arms ang the monster would be blue.
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What was sad is that at the olympics in the stadium the people in the grandstand were really hungry and the whole canteen was sold out so the people in the grandstand were eating each other but why? they could of went out of the stadium and went to the closes mcdonalds and brought food and came back
corey you put alot of words in there and i like that is very very coulorful
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ReplyDeletecorey are you there man? bro? dude?
ReplyDeleteI LIKE THAT YOU DESCRIBED THE WORDS AND THAT ITS COLOURFUL!!
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